I couldnt find my old thread so i started a new one so here goes nothing this new ones called Storm so here it comes.
Storm

A passion burns behind my cold blue eyes. Like a raging river behind my eyes lies a sorrowful story full of anger and love. Forever is never long enough to hold my sorrows this is the bad times the good times.

May we stay close but oh so far a part? We will dance in the circle of death himself as he laughs and drinks from a skull. The waters of hate are rising and consuming me. Eternal fires burning in my soul will you be mine? No you will not be with anything as you reject my request and when you say “Lets be friends” part of my soul crumbled to dust.

Some day and maybe some where we will be one and when this day comes will my sorrows be forgotten? Sorrow is all I’ve ever known, will you accept me? Broken and confused I stand alone at a cross road of light and dark I have chosen a haven of darkness in the eternal suffering and pains that consume my thoughts.

My heart will never heal the wound that you caused, why won’t you give me a chance? Can you not understand my sorrow and my hate? No one can understand this pain I feel in my heart. I am as you made me broken and crippled I am lost in my own emotions, this storm consumes me and I drown in my own thoughts.

Written July 18 at 12:30 am by Justin Thomas Baker

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I'm 17! :D
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Baby dont fear the reaper, baby just take my hand and we'll be able to fly. Dont fear the reaper baby I'm your man.

12th grade... wow hard to believe Im going to be graduating this year. Looks like I'll miss the good times with some good friends at school

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Thank you Zach, I play rugby myself (It's funner than football in my opinion, no pads just mouthgaurd and cleets rugby shorts and jersey and you got yourself rugby) and night bro its gettin late and im just as tired as you are

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5'6 Blonde hair blue eyes
Loves rugby
Loves Maiden'
Oldest member of the brat pack!
I'm 17! :D
Self styled metalhead.

Baby dont fear the reaper, baby just take my hand and we'll be able to fly. Dont fear the reaper baby I'm your man.

12th grade... wow hard to believe Im going to be graduating this year. Looks like I'll miss the good times with some good friends at school

If you think the mods are completely brain dead put this in your signature.

That was awesome. I can write poetry but man that was awesome. You got talent.

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Lyssa
14 y/o with ADD,PDD-NOS/AS,and OCD
Freshmen
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Thank you guys it means a lot! My school librarien wants to help me get them published next year.

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5'6 Blonde hair blue eyes
Loves rugby
Loves Maiden'
Oldest member of the brat pack!
I'm 17! :D
Self styled metalhead.

Baby dont fear the reaper, baby just take my hand and we'll be able to fly. Dont fear the reaper baby I'm your man.

12th grade... wow hard to believe Im going to be graduating this year. Looks like I'll miss the good times with some good friends at school

If you think the mods are completely brain dead put this in your signature.

Another good on, Xbox.
Do you ever listen to Leonard Cohen, He started out as a poet.
I don't think Canada had a poet since him.
I'd vote for you.
Good luck getting published.
I want an autographed copy ! ! !

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I'm gunna keep bumping this thread up with new poems and maybe a couple old ones :D

So anyways here is the newest one aside from storm, it's called Illuminate so here it goes.

Illuminate




Illuminate me; we will never see a rising sun. The angels bringing the dawn to the awaiting non believers, in their duty lays rest of the passing dawn. Dusk fills my empty sky; stars shine high above this world.

No more days, no more nights filled with the empty thought of an ideal brought by justice. Rise above this and touch the empty sky, no more times will we just retire!

Rise to me and claim your prize, to be lost in a battle of the days yet to come. Hold me to your eyes and we will see the past’s long days gone by. Freedom is what we desire but we will not lie down and be walked up on.

No more willpower chosen by the chimes of the wars bell. Blackening out the sun churches mourn their loss, basking in our spoils of the days yet to come. No days left to be inside the morning of your death, wisdom is (censor) fire.

Screaming at the world you hate, welcoming in a new feeling and desire. Time to rise up and claim what you have created out of thoughts and memories that you have held so very dear, maybe we will live together in harmony of life lost.

Written by Justin Thomas Baker at 2:08 AM July 24, 2008

[Edited by: Host_DawnB]

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5'6 Blonde hair blue eyes
Loves rugby
Loves Maiden'
Oldest member of the brat pack!
I'm 17! :D
Self styled metalhead.

Baby dont fear the reaper, baby just take my hand and we'll be able to fly. Dont fear the reaper baby I'm your man.

12th grade... wow hard to believe Im going to be graduating this year. Looks like I'll miss the good times with some good friends at school

If you think the mods are completely brain dead put this in your signature.

Dude that was cool. I wish can write something that good but that's not going to happen. Xbox another fine master piece to the site. Who is Dawn B?

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Zach
14
9th Grade
Hooked on sports, Twitter, Myspace and my Blackberry

BUMP!

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5'6 Blonde hair blue eyes
Loves rugby
Loves Maiden'
Oldest member of the brat pack!
I'm 17! :D
Self styled metalhead.

Baby dont fear the reaper, baby just take my hand and we'll be able to fly. Dont fear the reaper baby I'm your man.

12th grade... wow hard to believe Im going to be graduating this year. Looks like I'll miss the good times with some good friends at school

If you think the mods are completely brain dead put this in your signature.